Rather loose interpretation of the form, brother! Your lines are frequently overfilled past six feet and often employ slant rhyme - Shakespeare's name is given to the form because he popularized it, and if you read his surviving 154 sonnets closely you will see that he did neither of these things. Much love to you for the effort, but this is hardly a legitimate record.
Most Shakespearean Sonnets In A Manuscript
Rather loose interpretation of the form, brother! Your lines are frequently overfilled past six feet and often employ slant rhyme - Shakespeare's name is given to the form because he popularized it, and if you read his surviving 154 sonnets closely you will see that he did neither of these things. Much love to you for the effort, but this is hardly a legitimate record.